Today I made my first draft on Narrative writing. I have not finished

my piece of writing why?. Well because I am going to see how I am progressing

through my time doing Narrative writing. I am going to finish of my writing

through my short period of time doing literacy. What I dont like about

my writing is I am putting to much effort into a DRAFT!. What I like

about my writing is I have firstly hooked in the reader(I think) and have

put words I don't use. Here is my first draft for narrative writing.

Ghost ship in the lake.

One sunny morning I was awakened from a dark dream.I shook off my negative and went to brush my teeth while doing so I think my eyes were playing tricks on me but I saw an old looking ship. I thought nothing of it so once I finished brushing my teeth I went to eat breakfast. Again I saw the same ship but slightly closer.